Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Your smile makes magic


Yearning for a helping hand i was,
Obnoxious I was with the surroundings,
Upkeeping my spirits high,
Really your smile makes magic.

Sabotaging the sadness around you,
Minute smile of yours,
Instilled happiness in me,
Lilliputian may be to others,
Elegantly your smile makes magic.

Many a people i've met,
Astute I am with my words,
Kindling smile i've never seen,
Especially the big one,
Seriously your smile makes magic.

Mesmerizing many by ur speciality,
Although many dont feel ur beauty,
Gentle curving of ur lips,
Igniting the good feel in all,
Collectively your smile makes magic.....

The post dedicated to my special friend who always sends me a smilie nd has a very beautiful smile.......

22 comments:

ViDiShA said...

...dis was very nice...!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

nice lines ...ur gettin better at acrostics :)

keep writing.

Nave said...

good one indeed!

Dr.Kumar said...

Thanx Vidisha for stopping by my blog......
Thanx for d comments too....

Dr.Kumar said...

Thanx Ivy for the compliment.....

Dr.Kumar said...

thanx Navin for the comment......

Arun Kumar said...

nice acro da....

Where thoughts are Word$ said...

Very heartfelt post. :)

Cheers to you & your special friend!

^_^

Dr.Kumar said...

Thanx arun

Dr.Kumar said...

@Disha:
Thanx yaar.....

Arun Kumar said...

the new template looks nice da... neat...

n whatmore the comments is also working... :-)

Where thoughts are Word$ said...

Mention not!! :)

:P

roshwrites said...

good one :)

Anonymous said...

Hey Kummi...

U r getting good at acrostics...

Keep writing!

Phoenix said...

Oh my god..... this is just AMAZING!!! :)

Unknown said...

hey good one , but u have not told who tat person is whose smile is a magic!!!1

Urvashi said...

Nice work...!!

will follow ur log to read more from you..!

Dr.Kumar said...

Thanx fro the visit Urvashi.....

Sugandha Gupta said...

Thanks so much Doc for such a warm welcum in TWL ... and happy belated budday :)
god bless!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

you are tagged...!!!

visit my Land of Dreams...!!!

Unknown said...

its really so nice.gd work da:-)

Unknown said...

esp the last para s awesome