Friday, June 19, 2009

I miss you

My first attempt at acrostic.....
I MISS YOU
I didn't expect this end

Many days we spent together
Instilled in us the friendship
Shattered into pieces now
Sorry from my side

Yearning for the old relationshp i am
Obliviated by ur friendship
Useless I am without u......

11 comments:

Arun Kumar said...

nice acro da..
take out that V n put we... ur tp your... i think it will look good...
me too plannin a long time to try out an acro....

Arun Kumar said...

n as i've already told... new template looks fab da...

Dr.Kumar said...

Changed tat v da....
Thanx da....

Savannah said...

This is very good. I like the way you used "obliviated" very original. I hope you come back and participate again at Acrostic Only.

Where thoughts are Word$ said...

It doesn't look like the first attempt!!

Really nice one!! ^_^

yamini meduri said...

too good Raj,....but i felt it can be still done better...but as the first attempt...it was done good..!!

waiting for many more dear..!!!

Anonymous said...

nice !! more at WL :)

Dr.Kumar said...

cant get u prats

Dr.Kumar said...

Prats thanku for stopping by my blog....

Anonymous said...

Gud try da..
Its really a tough one to do...
Keep writing!

Unknown said...

Nice write for a first attempt at acrostic. All the best for the future...